Thursday, 25 March 2010

Excerpt Day - Enlightened © J.P. Barnaby


Being intimate with Jamie didn’t seem so intimidating anymore. He had just made me feel things I’d never before experienced; a high that I had scarcely known existed. His love had shown through in the intimacy that we just shared. It occurred to me that he must have been just as scared about going down on me as I was about doing it to him. But, he had done it. Wanting to show me the depth of his feelings, Jamie had made sure I felt every bit of his affection, his love for me. He would have done anything for me, of that I was sure.

Now, it was my turn, and I was ready.

Without pretense or hesitation, I scooted down on the mattress until my face was at his chest. He looked down at me, and before he could argue, I smiled at him and ran my fingers lightly over his nipples. Any protest that me might have proffered died in his throat and he lay back against the pillows. I nuzzled my face into his stomach, my nerves much too frayed to try to take things slowly. Reaching down, Jamie stroked my damp curls out of my face as I tried to unbutton his jeans. They  were tighter than mine, and I fumbled uselessly with the button fly. It wasn’t going well; I couldn’t even get his pants off. Sighing in frustration, I was surprised when his hands gently moved mine and unbuttoned his fly. Then, when he lifted his hips and pulled his jeans off, I was shocked to find that he wore nothing underneath. The thought that Jamie wore no underwear was beyond hot to me.

His cock stood long and lean and proud as it protruded from his coarse dark blond hair, with his small pink sack just below like a soft shadow. As I had done, he spread his legs wide, giving me room. It was too dark to see anything with much clarity, but I could see enough to set to work.

Only, I couldn’t.

Now that he was naked and laying right in front of me, the fear had returned in earnest. Not wanting to stop, I wrapped my fingers around him instead, stroking him as I would stroke myself. It felt entirely foreign to me, and I dipped my head down and kissed his hip. He moaned, squirming on the mattress as I touched him.

“God, Brian that feels so good.” His voice was barely above a whisper, but there was an electric charge in it, a hunger. I was turning him on. Something stirred in me. I was exciting him, and that made me feel powerful and more in control. Looking up, I noticed that his eyes were closed, and he was gripping the sheets just as I had. It didn’t take much to remember the way he made me feel, the force and the intensity of it.

Taking small steps first, I continued to stroke him as I pressed my lips to his inner thigh. I’m sure he could feel my breath on the sensitive apex between his legs, but I wasn’t quite ready to go further. As I stroked, my hand twisted lightly over the head of his cock and I placed a long wet kiss on his hip, moving down farther between his spread legs. The sounds that he was making encouraged me further. They were almost piteous whimpers, punctuated alternately with each stroke I made. Taking one more baby step, I tentatively kissed his sensitive sack. The sound that came from him then was almost a whine. I grinned, pleased that I could have this kind of effect on him. Emboldened by his response, I gently licked him. The taste was salty, and almost bitter with a harsh bumpy texture. The hairs tickled my lips as I licked him again, and he cried out sharply.

Enlightened © J.P.Barnaby

Read the first five pages HERE


The Little Boy Lost Series

Author: J.P. Barnaby


About the series

Little Boy Lost is the story of Brian McAllister, the boy next door.
Brian goes to school, he does his homework, and he helps his foster parents around the house. Brian also has a secret. He is in love with his best friend. In Crayford, Alabama being in love with another boy is the worst kind of sin.
Book One: Enlightened
"His lips were warm and smooth as they moved over mine. It was everything that a boy's first kiss should be.
Only it wasn't with a girl."
- Brian McAllister
In this first book, Enlightened, Brian and his best friend Jamie discover just how deep their emotional bond runs, and at what cost. From fumbling through their first sexual experiences to shrouding every aspect of their relationship from everyone in their lives, Brian and Jamie battle for the one thing that is truly theirs – love.
What will they do if their secret is discovered?



6 Speak To Me:

Smokinhotbooks on 25 March 2010 at 21:29 said...

Your reading this one, (gasp) yaaaaay! I'm so excited for you. This is probably one of my favorite m/m books I've read this year.

Chris on 25 March 2010 at 22:03 said...

*makes purchase*
*shakes fist toward the UK again*

J. P. Barnaby on 31 March 2010 at 01:35 said...

Hi, thank you so much for promoting the book. I sincerely appreciate it.

Erotic Horizon on 2 April 2010 at 02:04 said...


Not reading this yet - but had to post an excerpt .. after you raved about it so well..


Erotic Horizon on 2 April 2010 at 02:05 said...


Isn't that fist tired yet - just accept it.. enablers...


Erotic Horizon on 2 April 2010 at 02:06 said...


Not a problem my dear - If KC loved this one - I know I am going to enjoy it as well...

Congrats on your release...